I wish...
I could to tell you all the things i feel
to escape to a new place
to remember again and yet forget
to succumb at will
to replace
bad memories and regrets
to sneak back
to let loose
to streak through life
to cruise
to embrace and lose myself in a dream meant for two
the one that consists of me and you
i wish, but it is not my will
cuz the truth is...i took the red pill
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Go 'HEAD, Miz!
wow - it's been busy over here since i last came thru...
Speak opn it then Pahtnah! You know I LOVE those "hook" endings.
that's an interesting poem!
i like the picture that goes along with it.
I loved the last line. Well, I loved the whole thing, but that last line was quite the hook.
Thank y'all!
The "red pill" ending caught me by surprise. I loved it....T-Mc
Damn! I swear y'all are killing me on this blog. I was all caught up and then "WHAM!" A true rabbit outta the hat m'lady ;-)
I know your keyboard is still smokin'!
PREACH! PREACH mon frere
Nice!
Great surprise ending!
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