Tuesday, October 9, 2007

hold your head

i feel so alone and so unhappy
as if absolutely no one is there
at least not enough to truly care
people pretend
in the end
i completely realized how it was only me myself and i
and i wanted to cry
but the tears refused to fall
as if i was hopelessly doomed to experience no healing process at all
simply a life filled with nothing but great pain and sorrow
then i thought about it
there is always tomorrow

11 comments:

Don said...

Thanks for the invite. I really appreciate it. I definitely plan on coming different here.

CapCity said...

Nice one! I am especially glad this had a hopeful ending, Don.

BloggersDelight said...

Thank you for showcasing here, Don! We hope BloggersDelight is a place you'll feel less lonely.

writeous1 said...

THAT was writeous! Hold ya head up, Bro...there is always tomorrow...God willing.

Mega Rich said...

Hey, Don, that was nice.

Sojourner G said...

Well done! I can see it's gonna get hot in here.

GurlNexxDoor said...

Nice Write.

Mizrepresent said...

I can't even convey how many times i've felt this way...thinking it was a woman's thing...but Don you shone the light...it's a human thing...a very heartfelt piece dear.

Femigog said...

I'm feeling this one Don...

Don said...

Thanks everyone.

I know alot of peeps probably feel like I write from a woman's view, which I probably do, but my trials and tribulations forced me to now think as a woman does. Which so far, it has help me to avoid being labeled "non-affectionate," or not as caring as the woman - yesteryear's label.

David Sullivan said...

The feelings you expressed here aren't gender specific. More men should learn how to "feel" instead of acting on impulse. Empathy is the key.