Tuesday, October 9, 2007

hold your head

i feel so alone and so unhappy
as if absolutely no one is there
at least not enough to truly care
people pretend
in the end
i completely realized how it was only me myself and i
and i wanted to cry
but the tears refused to fall
as if i was hopelessly doomed to experience no healing process at all
simply a life filled with nothing but great pain and sorrow
then i thought about it
there is always tomorrow

11 comments:

Don said...

Thanks for the invite. I really appreciate it. I definitely plan on coming different here.

CapCity said...

Nice one! I am especially glad this had a hopeful ending, Don.

BloggersDelight said...

Thank you for showcasing here, Don! We hope BloggersDelight is a place you'll feel less lonely.

Anonymous said...

THAT was writeous! Hold ya head up, Bro...there is always tomorrow...God willing.

Mega Rich said...

Hey, Don, that was nice.

Anonymous said...

Well done! I can see it's gonna get hot in here.

GurlNexxDoor said...

Nice Write.

Mizrepresent said...

I can't even convey how many times i've felt this way...thinking it was a woman's thing...but Don you shone the light...it's a human thing...a very heartfelt piece dear.

Femigog said...

I'm feeling this one Don...

Don said...

Thanks everyone.

I know alot of peeps probably feel like I write from a woman's view, which I probably do, but my trials and tribulations forced me to now think as a woman does. Which so far, it has help me to avoid being labeled "non-affectionate," or not as caring as the woman - yesteryear's label.

David Sullivan said...

The feelings you expressed here aren't gender specific. More men should learn how to "feel" instead of acting on impulse. Empathy is the key.