Sunday, July 27, 2008

Love is...

I was looking for a man, but instead he found me

He whispered my name, i fell in shame and yet he did not shame me

He spoke of my pain

I cried

I blamed

He laid his hands on me

Told me to forgive thee

I tried but i could not muster the will to forgive my ownself

He grabbed me by the hand

We strolled through the land of my thoughts, my dreams, my experiences

And then he said

All of this is for you...

To be you...

To become you...

My child

My flower

I found God...inside of me

And not once did he disappoint me.

12 comments:

Kai C. said...

beautiful

nikki said...

those last two lines really put this piece over the top. wonderfully done, miz.

writers dream said...

kai c. said it for me.

Evelyn Knox aka DJ "This-That" said...

First of All: Wow...
Second: Thank you for your comment on my blog. I didn't mind the drive by.

Amritbir Kaur said...

A very beautiful and thought provoking poem!

Moanerplicity said...

BRAVO! This was a mad lovely piece that, in the end, was one of Praise to The Creator. Very well executed!

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CapCity said...

AllllRRIIIIIGGGHHHTTT!!!

Mimi said...

I loved this...thought provoking.

MysTery said...

Nice. You have motivated me to work on an old piece. Thanks ya :)

Mizrepresent said...

Thanks to all of you for your comments and praise. Give God the glory and the praise.

Kin'shar said...

wow I was highly touched by this one, as I wrote about God too on my previous blog.

N. Steven said...

oof. nicely done.

i'm not gonna lie. i was expecting to get a description of another Morris Chestnut...lovely surprise.