I was looking for a man, but instead he found me
He whispered my name, i fell in shame and yet he did not shame me
He spoke of my pain
I cried
I blamed
He laid his hands on me
Told me to forgive thee
I tried but i could not muster the will to forgive my ownself
He grabbed me by the hand
We strolled through the land of my thoughts, my dreams, my experiences
And then he said
All of this is for you...
To be you...
To become you...
My child
My flower
I found God...inside of me
And not once did he disappoint me.
Sunday, July 27, 2008
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12 comments:
beautiful
those last two lines really put this piece over the top. wonderfully done, miz.
kai c. said it for me.
First of All: Wow...
Second: Thank you for your comment on my blog. I didn't mind the drive by.
A very beautiful and thought provoking poem!
BRAVO! This was a mad lovely piece that, in the end, was one of Praise to The Creator. Very well executed!
One.
AllllRRIIIIIGGGHHHTTT!!!
I loved this...thought provoking.
Nice. You have motivated me to work on an old piece. Thanks ya :)
Thanks to all of you for your comments and praise. Give God the glory and the praise.
wow I was highly touched by this one, as I wrote about God too on my previous blog.
oof. nicely done.
i'm not gonna lie. i was expecting to get a description of another Morris Chestnut...lovely surprise.
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