Tuesday, April 22, 2008

Fly Away...In haiku

Inspired by Xavier's piece. I think it's quite obvious! lol. Anyway, something for the cause:

Fly away my love
No more will his touch harm you
It is but a dream...

5 comments:

Mizrepresent said...

i felt this...

Sharon shares said...

Excellent Haiku Mystery! I believe that the haiku is the purest form of poetry because it says it all with a minimum of words and with this, you have definitely said it all! ;)

CapCity said...

So glad u're BACK! i've missed your powerful "li'l bits" Queen of Haiku that u r, MysTery!

Xave said...

@MysT: I'm absolutely moved by this. And honored. You have distilled Teh essence of Fly Away.

Peace and Love,

Alizé (LoversA.blogspot.com)

Chari said...

Thanks for the love guys. :)

And thanks X!