Thursday, February 14, 2008

* Prostration *

moments have passed
seconds
minutes
since you plunged deep
inside me
and took away
my humanity
now
I lay bloodied
hot flesh on cold tile
my heart eviscerated
thumping heavily
slowly
to a hault.


Copyright 2008, DENEA MARCEL

**Denea emailed me this, and I wanted to make sure it made it in in time. **

7 comments:

BloggersDelight said...

Denea - This poem is evocative.


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CapCity said...

Denea, GURL - u know I loved this when i first read it! EVERY time I read it - it GETS to me;-).

Mizrepresent said...

Me loves it too...but give that gurl some life support, lol!

Haute in LA said...

Love this poem! I feel it in a way you can't even imagine.

I'm no poet, but SO glad I found this blog!!!

Lyrically speaking said...

Another wonderful piece

MysTery said...

Whoa!

denea marcel said...

wow, thanks for all the love!

rich thanx for posting for me... i'm so out of it on the net sometimes. LOL