moments have passed
seconds
minutes
since you plunged deep
inside me
and took away
my humanity
now
I lay bloodied
hot flesh on cold tile
my heart eviscerated
thumping heavily
slowly
to a hault.
Copyright 2008, DENEA MARCEL
**Denea emailed me this, and I wanted to make sure it made it in in time. **
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Denea - This poem is evocative.
Thank you for participating in our first Annual Readers' Choice Award. Good luck & Congratulations!
Denea, GURL - u know I loved this when i first read it! EVERY time I read it - it GETS to me;-).
Me loves it too...but give that gurl some life support, lol!
Love this poem! I feel it in a way you can't even imagine.
I'm no poet, but SO glad I found this blog!!!
Another wonderful piece
Whoa!
wow, thanks for all the love!
rich thanx for posting for me... i'm so out of it on the net sometimes. LOL
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