Tuesday, January 22, 2008


It's winter now, and i vaguely remember
Soft ties, luscious lies...falling timber
Your eyes meet mine, your mind caresses
all that i am and know
can't wait for snow...but oh

It's winter now, just last September, or was it November
You held me, loved me, stroked me insane
We were wishing for rain, but instead we got a rainbow
A spectrum of colors, blended perfectly to be....what we want it to be

It's winter now, just past December...and i can't forget you
i still remember, your touch, your taste, your smile
Makes me want to sit and rock a while on this chair, this porch, this swing
that is you...
you bring
me back...even though...it's winter

It's winter now, way past January...well into February
but it doesn't matter cuz the feeling remains
you are still the same...a stain
on my heart
while we drift apart

It's winter now...
And I am cold.


Mega Rich said...

That was such a warm heartfelt sentiment.

clnmike said...

I dont get it what happen? Was it a break up or just time apart?

CapCity said...

i just kept hearing Gil Scott's Winter in America playin' ... nice!

Faith said...

This is very unique. I like how you put your feelings across in this piece :-). N thanx for the comment. God Bless!

Anonymous said...

Wow. I felt like I was sittin' on that porch with you, rockin' myself and bracing against the cold.

I'm aiight, but your writing transports.

MzPoetiK said...

GOOD STUFF. I was gonna say wow but G beat me to it lol. I was moved...and I know abt winter.

nikki said...

how about i started shivering like "damn, it got cold in here all of a sudden..."

well done, miz.

BloggersDelight said...

Emotional winters are frigid, indeed MizRepresent. Well said!