Wednesday, January 16, 2008

i miss you

in the morning...
like my coffee latte, you perk me up
send me on my way, rising and flying just by the words you say

i miss you...
in the afternoon, after the morning rush
your vibe, tantalizing...making me blush

i miss you
in the evening, when i'm lying down
imagining you near me, the king i crowned

i miss you
with every breath
every heartbeat
every blink
every wink

i miss your essence
your smell, your taste...
nothing about you was waste


i miss u and me
i miss we

10 comments:

Mega Rich said...

don't be trying to win the contest :-)

Blu Jewel said...

I'm missing IT and HIM too. I recive this with mixed emotions, but it's a great piece nonetheless.

Sojourner G said...

Been there Pahtnah. Matta fact, it was Monday. (so don't trip when you soon see another take on this with the same title, LOL)

MzPoetiK said...

Nice write...I can kind of relate with it...good stuff

CapCity said...

those are the words men write for me! LOL! ;-) For real tho' very nice piece, Miz!

Lovebabz said...

Sister,
I was wondering how to think of my soon-to-be ex-husband. You captured my thoughts perfectly, especially the part:
i miss your essence
your smell, your taste...
nothing about you was waste

It is not a longing to go back or have him come back. Just a statement of remembering what was and is no more. (sigh)

Ali's Zay said...

Awe man, very sweet and to the point. I enjoyed it very much.

Peace and Love,

Ali's Zay (LoversA.blogspot.com)

G-Sweet said...

im feelin this on a personal level!

BloggersDelight said...

While we see no indicators, MizRepresent - would you like this to be considered for the First Annual Readers' Choice Award? It fits the criteria.

Mizrepresent said...

Thanks guys!

No Rich, i am not trying to win...lol. BD thanks, but not this one.