Is it you?
Is it me?
Is it her?
Is it he?
I at first assumed it was 3
But now 4
In my home
That whore!
Doing things I don't
Doing things I won't
Doing things I tried
Tell me why you lied?
In my face smiling
Behind my back wiling
All along knowing
That you was hoe-ing
Giving away goods I thought were mines
Never answering your cell the 1st time
Calling me back wit lame excuses
If it slapped you in the face you wouldn't know what truth is
But I gotta secret
You remember those meetings?
And what a meeting it was
Why I did it? Just because
In front of my face I was betrayed
Love and affection that was mines you gave away
So in another mans bed I did lay
But I did not stay
He had her picture
The sista that was wit you
The one you hugged the sheets wit all nite
Was this mans wife
I couldn't do it
Screw it
In a city so small
I knew it
Trying to be triflin like you
I messed up me
In hindsight I can see
I should of just let it be
Now heartbroken and confused
My pride and ego bruised
Feeling so lost and abused
I lose
But don't think you win
In the nxt chapter the drama really begins
I just found abt her and he doesn't know abt you
But NOW we do
*wink*
MzP
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17 comments:
Oh wow! The flow. The message. The imagery. The lesson. The reality.
The ish!
Nicely done.
Oh damn! Like that huh? I'm gonna follow this very closely.
Peace and Love,
Ali's Zay (LoversA.blogspot.com)
Well Now, I am feeling this peace, keep on doing, what you doing BABY...
angelia aka mama deep
A lot of venom in that one.
Many thanks to all I was nervous abt how my 1st piece here would go over.
Glad you liked!!
MzP
N*ggas is trifling!
Everyone at some point has been there…got to let it out…
Now that's some fine story telling right there. I felt like I was watching a movie line by line. You spoke volumes right here!
No doubt, a crowd favorite. I was digging it. But imagine my surprise when I originally thought a certain male writer was the author and I thought it was female on female and male on male until I saw MzPoetic at the end of the trail. I reread again, got the real story and ended with a grin.
Good Job, keep up the good work.
mspuddin- ain't they! lol
blu- Thank You
mega- you got me crackin up right now...I'm glad u liked it :)
MzP
man
reading this made it seem like it happened to me lol
i don't even want to think about a woman i'm with cheating
men do it all the time so i guess that's why it's harder for us to take it
damn!.... thats deep... and WELL expressed!... good shit!
MzPoetik - this is a moving piece, indeed.
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Gurl, that was sooooo good! Loved it!
James-lol thanks and EXACTLY lol
gsweet- Thank You :)
BD- Thanks and I sure will
Miz- Thanks soooo much :)
Oooh I felt that!
Okay why I gotta come over here to read your new material!!
Good work MzP!! :o)
Well alright then!!! This was good...
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