Monday, October 22, 2007

Hai to the Ku!

These express my mood a bit:

All up in my face
Telling me how much you know
But you are not God


Behind shaded eyes
Waiting for me to lose it
My faith will not cease


Tempting my temper
Stepping on my pressure points
Control I won't give


Not sure why, but they keep coming...These aren't as good as the others, but that's ok! I'll get better! Thanks for reading!!

7 comments:

BloggersDelight said...

You may soon earn the title as the Ku Queen, MysTery! We never realized such varied passions could be contained in so few syllables.

T. S. Snowden said...

I told you that I now have a new respect for the haiku thanks to you. keep them coming

Lyrically speaking said...

Wow, this piece has much character...powerful!

lea78 said...

short but to the point. These go perfectly with the day that I am having. I am on an official No Men Strike!!!!

Mizrepresent said...

This is excellent!

Don said...

That was good. I don't know WHAT you are talking about. I understand everything you said.

oronde ash said...

dont really write them
saw yours on the web today
so i tried one too

the dimples are cute
black and white half face smiling
keeping something back

submitted a piece
love poem of sorts i guess
it may fit the theme

visit my site when
time permits you space to think
'bout black folks living