she walks on this lost land
wandering to find a place
where there's heaven and light
stirring around
in the name of of love
only love she have to save herself
only sweet love she can wait on
oh tell her this world is all dark
like black skies
without stars, without sunlight
all dark
every day her heart broke
falling into broken pieces
and oh, she has no love
no sweet, sweet love
anymore on this lost land
this lost land used to be
crowded, full of city twiligts
thousand mile butterflies
and plus, heaven and light
now this land is all empty
white noises serenade
she has blown all the winds
and destroy many souls
over the top pink mountains
with her beautiful anger
all grey, frustration of fire
she steps upon a rock
clock ticks, recalling on bitter memories
throwing away the tears like pebbles
and oh, she spun
sway fast speeding
as the winds go around
and around
knocking down her bones
and she's lost inside her soul
where she cannot find love
anywhere on
this lost land
her lost land,
it's where she hides and
being all alone
without love
without sweet, sweet unconditional love
upon this lost land
her lost, lost world...
~
©2008 Kai C..
8 comments:
wow neva thought of a world....that was lost and without love. Damn that's gotta hurt.I am not used to be alone but when I am alone I feel so cold and numb.
1sssttttt, have a good day
whooaaa, Kai - u been gettin' DEEP on us lately! where's the sweet Kai? LOL! I'm loving this side of U, too!
thanks guys. sometimes i have to be deep.
Oh, I loved it a lot
I love poems like these, well done
amazingly written, though there are some grammar mistakes
But yeah, Keep it up :)
P.S I've seen your comment on Nasra's poem, I thought I'd take a look at your poems :)
Best of luck
Thanks for stopping by! Cool site, will show love on blog list. Will be back soon!
Organize Kaos
Hey there!
{waves}
I love the vibe at this blog!!
Stop by my blog and jump into some conversations when you have a chance!!
Peace, blessings and DUNAMIS!
Lisa
thank u
"you're female, which means you're more likely to have your time stolen by heart disease than a man." - I agree with this, but when I first read it and saw time stolen, disease and man I thought about HIV. #1 Killer of women my age.
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