Thursday, February 14, 2008

* Prostration *

moments have passed
seconds
minutes
since you plunged deep
inside me
and took away
my humanity
now
I lay bloodied
hot flesh on cold tile
my heart eviscerated
thumping heavily
slowly
to a hault.


Copyright 2008, DENEA MARCEL

**Denea emailed me this, and I wanted to make sure it made it in in time. **
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7 comments:

  1. BloggersDelightFebruary 15, 2008 at 6:45 AM

    Denea - This poem is evocative.


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  2. CapCityFebruary 17, 2008 at 11:10 PM

    Denea, GURL - u know I loved this when i first read it! EVERY time I read it - it GETS to me;-).

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  3. MizrepresentFebruary 18, 2008 at 3:22 PM

    Me loves it too...but give that gurl some life support, lol!

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  4. Haute in LAFebruary 19, 2008 at 2:08 PM

    Love this poem! I feel it in a way you can't even imagine.

    I'm no poet, but SO glad I found this blog!!!

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  5. Lyrically speakingFebruary 21, 2008 at 11:09 AM

    Another wonderful piece

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  6. ChariFebruary 28, 2008 at 4:30 PM

    Whoa!

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  7. denea marcelMarch 6, 2008 at 11:06 AM

    wow, thanks for all the love!

    rich thanx for posting for me... i'm so out of it on the net sometimes. LOL

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