Wednesday, January 16, 2008

i miss you

in the morning...
like my coffee latte, you perk me up
send me on my way, rising and flying just by the words you say

i miss you...
in the afternoon, after the morning rush
your vibe, tantalizing...making me blush

i miss you
in the evening, when i'm lying down
imagining you near me, the king i crowned

i miss you
with every breath
every heartbeat
every blink
every wink

i miss your essence
your smell, your taste...
nothing about you was waste


i miss u and me
i miss we
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10 comments:

  1. Rich FitzgeraldJanuary 16, 2008 at 7:03 PM

    don't be trying to win the contest :-)

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  2. Blu JewelJanuary 16, 2008 at 8:27 PM

    I'm missing IT and HIM too. I recive this with mixed emotions, but it's a great piece nonetheless.

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  3. AnonymousJanuary 16, 2008 at 9:27 PM

    Been there Pahtnah. Matta fact, it was Monday. (so don't trip when you soon see another take on this with the same title, LOL)

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  4. MzPoetiKJanuary 17, 2008 at 7:23 AM

    Nice write...I can kind of relate with it...good stuff

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  5. CapCityJanuary 17, 2008 at 8:26 AM

    those are the words men write for me! LOL! ;-) For real tho' very nice piece, Miz!

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  6. Babz Rawls IvyJanuary 17, 2008 at 8:47 AM

    Sister,
    I was wondering how to think of my soon-to-be ex-husband. You captured my thoughts perfectly, especially the part:
    i miss your essence
    your smell, your taste...
    nothing about you was waste

    It is not a longing to go back or have him come back. Just a statement of remembering what was and is no more. (sigh)

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  7. XaveJanuary 18, 2008 at 1:43 AM

    Awe man, very sweet and to the point. I enjoyed it very much.

    Peace and Love,

    Ali's Zay (LoversA.blogspot.com)

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  8. G-SweetJanuary 20, 2008 at 1:22 PM

    im feelin this on a personal level!

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  9. BloggersDelightJanuary 20, 2008 at 6:06 PM

    While we see no indicators, MizRepresent - would you like this to be considered for the First Annual Readers' Choice Award? It fits the criteria.

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  10. MizrepresentJanuary 21, 2008 at 8:39 AM

    Thanks guys!

    No Rich, i am not trying to win...lol. BD thanks, but not this one.

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