** I like to refer to this style as "run-on" because some of the lines run into the next one.
WOUNDED
never was one to share
my heart
belongs to I
give you the stick
to my game plan and keep
my emotions
intact – I was hurt but
looking for a place to fall
inside you
nurtured me back
to friends we go
around and around
how
can you give
and take
your love
for me to
someone else.
Creative! Nice write. :)
ReplyDeleteU know the initial explanation threw me - i thought this was Girly Girl (u must be taking notes;-). I'm digging it!
ReplyDeletenice flow Rich...feeling this!
ReplyDeleteMega Rich, the many possible interpretations make this an intriguing piece.
ReplyDeleteLoving it so sweet
ReplyDeleteThat was tight Rich.
ReplyDeleteNice. :)
ReplyDelete"i was looking for a place to fall inside you"
ReplyDeleteLOVE that line. great poem, rich.
Forgive me for saying so, but I think your explanation takes away from the piece. When I cleared my mind and read it again, my intellect was tickled in the most pleasant way by this piece and its intriguing permutations.
ReplyDeletePeace and Love,
Ali's Zay (LoversA.blogspot.com)
I'm wit Zay. Very cool piece.
ReplyDeleteWell noted my brothers. Thanks for the kind words ladies.
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